AWsome
i have never heard the original song before but i like it!!!! It would be nice if you put the lyrics in your comment.
First of all the words flow very nicely with the song except for a couple of parts.
I think you might want to keep working on this song it could be something great. I think it might even make somewhere near the top!
Lets talk more about the song now. The part at 3:00 where you changed the singers voice i did not like very much it made the song flow not as well. The
Melody was very nice... ALL OF THEM. Keep working on this song, even more than you already have.
9/10
5/5
.:The Goopers:.