the words did not mix
The words did not fit at all with this remix thing it would be good if u could fix it :(
I think this could be great if you made it fit correctly. I think u should def continue this as it could be something very good.
thanks for the rev
its missings somthing...
i don't knot but i feel it is missing something important. This also sounds a lot like a loop not a song i think if u figure out what is missing and turn this into a loop it could be put into a flash animation :)
Thank you for you review
i think of...
When i hear this song i think of an explorer on the high seas discovering new and interesting things :)
Great idea! The song would be really good for that. Thx for sharing!
This song is great!!!! the only thing i would change is quiet it down at the begining.
this is good..
i think you should work on the bass a little bit and change the melody up a little bit more every once in a while.
i could imagine this being more of a loop not a song because of how repetitive it is. it just sounds like not enough new stuff was added. but it was nice and long and some parts sounded like stuff i have never heard before which is new... i think thats good... but w/e. keep up the good work and try to work on the repetitive ness.
I know this song is repetative, I wrote it and sometimes is gets on my nerves lol, thats why I am going to go back and rework it because there are some elements of it that I like. Thanks for the review.
the song felt a little lacking to me it seemed as if it could use a bass and one of those parts in the middle of the song where it gets all slow and quite then builds up to something... idk its probs just me and it might not be ur style but it defenitly needs to be longer and have a bass i stlil liked it though :)
Thx for the review. And I'm really not at all too familiar with dance music so, I'll be sure and add a build up next time. ^.^
Dustin ( Mushu-Productions)
Just sometimes the base did not match up with the guitar and it was a little bland...
you need a melody dude and make it a little louder and try not to spend so much time on nothing like at the begining.
This song is amazing!!! great job!!! oh and tell kyle i said good luck :)
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